It was an ordinary day. Today my middle grandchild, Camille, will be my guest blogger. Her birthday is today and we are celebrating it at Ocean City, NJ. She turned six today and wanted to know if she could type a story for me about our first evening to the rides on the boardwalk. To me it is amazing what a six year old can do. When I was in first grade I learned how to read about Dick and Jane and their adventures. Today’s first graders learn to read the newspaper! As far as composition, here is her story .........It was an ordinary day. we are on vacation. the frst night we went on the rides. we went on thomas the monorail, the ferris wheel, the wacky worm, the railroad roller costr, the log flum. but my favrorite was the ferris wheel. I was icsidid. I was scard. courtney,tampah and me sat on the same side. we saw other rides, mommy, sunset,lots of pepole, the bech, the boardwalk. wen I got off I ran to mommy. I finished my night weth Ritas.
She informed me that she had used a few compound words. Do all of you kno
w what they are? I did help her with the comma insertion and hope I didn't ruin her story. I hope you enjoy her story as much as I did participating in it and riding on the coaster with her. It was another extraordinary day in the life of an ordinary guy. PS - one photo shows Camille at the computer while other shows Courtney on left, me in the middle and Camille on the right while we are at the top of the ferris wheel.
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